Well...

Firstly, you really shouldn't have changed the appearance of your character from issue 1 to 2. You definetly need to work on your animation, because in today's society, in order for a Flash like this to be good, it's got to be really good. Basic flash animations usually are meant to be funny.

I gave you a few points mainly because you put {The Traveller} in there. Still, things you could have done to make it better:
-Don't feel time as a pressure. The people on NG won't kill you if you don't have a due date. Take longer but make it good.
-Take some time to get a little better at animations.
-Don't make any more rapid changes to the character, keep him close (or relatively close if you want to make him look better) to what he is now.

The story has some potential, though I felt a little wierd seeing the DBZ-type thing...

That was really good

A bit on the short side, but i can't wait to see #3. The music was excellent, along with the storyline so far. So, i give this 4 gravestones..... out of 5. Oh, i didn't know his name was harry. It might've been in #1, but i forgot if it was..

This is good.

I voted 5.
Becuase I could see (and hear) the DBZ influence, and I love DBZ. Where did you get that SoundEffect from DBZ? The part with Mary, (I assume his wife, or was his wife) was really emotional with that beautiful music playing, that was done perfectly. Mary's ghost could have been drawn alot better though. The sound and music was pretty good. And you used music from cornandbeans and I am a fan. Good job, and I hope you get your photoshop working again, that program is amazing....

Nice one

It was better than the first and shows and improovment. i also know u did this really fast as uv only just ended your 1st one so to do all that is impressive.
good to see a story forming making more use of the cliff hangers

and maybe he used the car in the first one coz he likes the new car smell??

lol all that really needs work is the art as i know you can do better with a little time

well done