This is one of the Flashes on the site that get outsiders to come and check the scene out, and then they run into jerks like the Star Syndicate and the rest of those pigs running this place into a sty. I'm very glad you transcend that lot.
Graphics: 4. You messed up a variety of effects that could have looked nicer, like manipulating with gradients and dodging the morphing effects that just look bad. Text also clipped along the far edges; they didn't fully fit the camera shot.
Style: 8. The artwork, on the other hand, is where the Flash shines. It's a combination of sweet and psychedelic circa late 60s early 70s. It also has a sweet groove and very romantic. This is something you watch with your lover (and not be embarrassed about).
Sound: 7. A crisp mastering of the music complements the presentation well.
Interactivity, Violence, and Humor each get a zero because A: there wasn't a reply button; B: there isn't any violence, and C: there isn't any real humor. Sure, it's positive, but the end is sort of a bittersweet closing note to the tale.
Overall: 7. There are places where this could be improved, mostly in the technical details mentioned. The expression and style, however, cannot be dulled.