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^^Good Points^^
This looked to be pretty awesome. The effects you used were pretty cool in this. The graphical style and realism in the movements was very good. I also like the staticky overlay. Looks like the full collab will be great.
^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you'll be lucky to get random people with skill to match yours and make a good collab. I'm sure you would be better off just making a full movie by yourself.