Really?
I would've rated even lower out of pure frustration if wasn't at least entertained by your animation. I'm looking for real stuff and you're here calling this "Sexy Bear Hentai"? There really should be a rule against doing that.
On to the critiquing... You could have done better on the anatomy. Their heads were like logs. If you can do this, you're capable of great things. You just need to work things to their proper dimensions.