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the boy..."Magpie"

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The boy with razorblades under his eyes has a close encounter with a magpie.
This is the second installment of the boy… I hope you enjoy it.


Major Flaw.

Animation was inconsistent with the story. for instance razor blades UNDER his eyes. It was clearly OVER his eyes in the story.


It is stupid and the animation is bad.


pretty decent animation, and a funny story line, could have been better, could have been worse, like all those flash submissions DrDemento456 has sub....mit...ted....ohhh....*sorry just got word he hasn't submitted anything, yet he tells others not to continue making them* looking forward to big things from him...big things...

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Poetry or not...

...this is sick. I'll thank you not to subject me to something like this again in the future.

Now, to be fair, your artwork was great overall, and the voice acting was well done too, but the subject matter has me wanting to rate you a zero simply to show that I don't support it. With this in mind, I'll give you 4/10 for your efforts, subtracting the remaining 6 because you wasted your talents making something disgusting.


People who blam it don't like dark poetry.

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3.39 / 5.00

Apr 6, 2007
9:44 AM EDT
Comedy - Original