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bpX: Skits 4,5,11,12 & 13

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Hello again Newgrounders! Here's 5 more random animated skits, fuelled by insanity, for you to enjoy! This time including a spoof of that really annoying 'Frosties' advert from a while back, and a very experimental 'ink pen'.
Viva NG!
Barno, Smoking Chimney Productions U.K.

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Nice work but

My understanging of british humor is not very good, but I think this one was alright! However it was sad that this one was incomplete because it had Few gliches and you could add few little things to improve it. Play all button would be great, then when you cycle through them and come to last one I think by pressing "next" you should go to the first Skit and Vice Versa. Also the grenade skit was quite buggy, it had some places where offscreen art was visible, fixing this is very simple just add a mask or another layer above everything which would make it work.

Smoking-Chimney responds:

Thanks for a very decent review. Firstly glad you liked it, but thanks for posing suggestions which will definitely help in future projects. Stay cool Teshla :D

Okay animation & good writing. Now fix that menu.

Graphics: Sketchy people, but at least he put some effort into animating them and didn't use motion tweens.

Style: It's rough, but at least it's consistantly rough.

Sound: Moderately good voice-acting. Gotta goddamn love the goddamned yank accent.

Violence: That is the least disturbing knife factory death I've seen all week.

Interactivity: Clicking "Ink Pen" from the main menu links to "How're they gonna taste" instead. Clicking the MENU button at the end does nothing. And you could have saved us all the whole hassle of a menu to begin with, by just making it one long linear movie with like, a flash of light and a "boop" between skits or something. Sod your vintage end credits, save 'em for the Extended Features DVD you will no doubt make one day.

Humor: Pretty funny. Keep 'em comin'.

Overall: I'd normally have a bunch of advice here on how to refine your drawing and animation, since that was the weakest part of this Flash, but your jokes, comedic timing, and delivery are enough to carry this flash as-is. I'd raise it to a 7 if you'd fix that goddamned menu, goddammit!

OMFG!

I just couldn't stop laughing after i watched skits 4 and 5! that beaver thing and his dancing was just too funny! "God dammit! GOD DAMMIT GOD DAMMIT!!!" LOL i'm glad thats not my dad:P

the only thing i reccomend fixing is that you fix the replay button, as i noticed they were not working

anyway great flash and keep up the good work:D

very.... umm

random. it didnt make sence. the menu button didnt work. keep on trying though

shite!

that was absolutely shite ifeel sick after watching this!

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Apr 2, 2007
5:40 PM EDT