Well lets see now.
It WOULD have been ok if there weren't so many things wrong with it. For one, GET A TRIPOD! The camera is so shaky you can't tell whats going on. Second of all, you can't tell what any of the creatures are except for a toothpick. And third, in the end it says "Cloud job level up"... What?!? "Job"?! Whats that for?
P.S. Movies with sound always have a better chance of surviving.