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This is the first flash that I have finished. It is incredibly stupid, but I think that the animation is halfway decent. So give me some advice and hopefully my next one won’t be so dumb.

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K

^^Good Points^^
I liked this, it was kind of cute. It was cool how you made it seem like the shadowed can was a bad guy, but then you changed it all with the ending, which was kind of corny, but made me chuckle. You've got some good animating skill too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, a little corny for an ending, which I'm sure a lot of people won't really appreciate as much as I have.

petemanpeter responds:

Yeah, the whole point of it was to be stupid. Even I think it's corny, and I made it.

Not too bad at all

You have great potential. Put more time into your next flash with some decent voice acting and you may find yourself making a pretty good series. Keep it up.

its Ok

its got art quality

sound good
animation basic but OK
its kinda dumb, but I seen MUCH dumber.

Short, but good

I'm not saying it's worthy of best flash ever, but I am saying that it's pretty good, nice work!!! ..
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Not bad

That was actually really good for a first attempt, the graphics were great, and the animation was fairly smooth.

My advice:
It needs more storyline, more stuff going on in the plot.
It was pretty slow, try speeding up the animation a bit, more stuff happening at once and suchlike.
Possibly make it more dynamic, so the characters move around and the background changes.

It was, indeed, stupid, but I liked it.

You've got a lot of potential, keep working at it.

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Uploaded
Mar 31, 2007
5:02 PM EDT