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Not bad I guess!

Animation is passable and the humor is decent all it needed is some sound. That's kinda what brought the score down a little bit. Just keep it in mind next time okay? Other then that it was pretty decent I hope to see more from you in the future!

Needs some sound

It was a good flash and BUT it really NEEDS some noise anything!

Long, nice concept, but not good quality.

First and foremost, the flash needs some voiceover work and sound effects, or at least some background music (any sound at all would be nice).
Second, a lot of your graphics need to be readjusted. Some are more than slightly askew from the object with which they are interacting (i.e. robot and outlet), some are partially cut off from the screen ("BEGIN" in MonkeyBall), and some just disappear spontaneously (the main goomba symbol disappears partway into the second Mario scene). Also present was very rudimentary tweening. Especially troubling were the question marks on the box, as they appeared partially off the top surface of the block.
Finally, this flash is set up as an endless loop, but you should put in an END screen and set up a replay button.
Ultimately, I can't give you a passing grade for this flash, as there are too many flaws. Luckily, these are a bunch of tiny problems that can be easily fixed (as opposed to one giant problem), so you should have no trouble following my suggestions. I look forward to seeing the revised product.

NessSuccess responds:

no u

Need sound

Well, as my one line summary says, needs sound. Well technically it says need sound but I can't be bothered to back tab to adjust. Perhaps a tad less tween as well might be nice but otherwise quite good to be honest.

I gave it a four! Funny Mario thing.

That is, a four on the 5 rating system. I like the mario thing, your a good writer, I wasn't familiar with the other games because I've only played like 20 or something old Nintendo DS games. You need a stopper, a the end, and maybe the newgrounds logo.

You need sound.