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I would like to see some more contrast between lights and darks.

Some scenes are so pale that they can be frustrating to look at, but maybe it was intentional.

Anyhow, just an opinion. I hope to see more.

K

^^Good Points^^
Yeah, definitely a good intro as far as they go. The length was good, and it made me interested to see exactly what this is about. The graphics were very cool, especially the people you had, as they were animated very neatly. Interesting movie, I'm sure the full version will be a success.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't completely aligning I guess you could say. Your characters were awesome, but some stuff like the backgrounds didn't look nearly as good.

nice one

that was a pretty sick and slick intro. this one had a very nice plot and concept to it, good graphics, a nice character and it shows a ton of potential. i, for one, look forward to seeing more based off of Violatrix.

that was sick

that would suck to be me but that was kinda cool

Amazing, but a bit too short!

This was brilliant, a solid 5 in my humble opinion. I really liked your style. I wouldn't mind if it was a bit longer though :)