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Mar 28, 2007 | 8:47 AM EDT

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not great work, i did it at school (im at school now actually)
but i thought id submit it...



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad but not very good either

It was OK and though the fact about the preloader was stated, I do find it pretty bothersome. The graphics could have been made better but I've seen worse. It is a very short video making it rather boring and not much to look at. I have heard the song that was playing with the flash before and it somewhat goes with the storyline. For example, the lyrics say, "I went to school and I was very nervous.." doesn't have anything to do with it although you hear that if you keep on watching it despite the preloader. But overall, it's nice work but seems like it was a little effortless work. Some effort but not that much put into it. Sorry if that insulted you, anyways.

pauly2smally responds:

i had 2 days, in 2 days i had to do this, i would have put a preloader on but i was more about finishing the actual work, i had to draw with a mouse to wich was a bummer


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Not good

the grapichs aren't to well music is good and the idea is good but it's a bit short not much happening he walks out pub sad home adn you see why and than he is dead maby there should be somethigns happening in the pub or familty of the guy and when i heard the song i thought of the flash 3Million that flash has the same songs. and last thing did you made this flash on school????? kinda strange you made it on school :D.

pauly2smally responds:

i agree with everythign u sed, some of my worst work but i reli liked the story to it so i went ahead with it, if it had a preloader itd be better i think.


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


The only redeeming factor is Mad World by Gery Jules, but even that does not make up for your lame drawery and animation. It would have been way awesomer if only you had made him lipsynch the words.

pauly2smally responds:

i would have done much more, but wiht the time i was given it was pretty amazing wt i got done


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not bad!

I agree with Darknine, you chose the song really well, I like it very much! I don't know if it's normal but at the end it starts over again, which I don't complain, but there's a little problem with the music: the song is continuing and in the same time starting over so you've got 2 songs superimposed (???)! so mabye you can fix that! Anyway, you did a good job! Keep up!

pauly2smally responds:

i wold fix that but it was at school, i will fix it tho


Rated 5 / 5 stars

sad (crying sad)

good choice of music and very emotionaly sad. a bit better drawing and no loop and i would reccomens this for no.1. p.s make it slighly longer plz.