{nothing too new}

um...wtf? it was way too shorrt and it was hard to follow

Liked

It seemed alittle rushed to be honest, in the editing that is, like perhaps you have left alittle too much material out, especially at the end with the brown clay being rolled up and then there was a few quick shots before an abrupt ending. I didn't like the cloudy effect there was with the camera, maybe it was bad resolution but it didn't seem too clear. It wasn't all bad though, actually it was mostly good besides those two points, good animation and i liked the song choice.

~H-J~

i think you deserve better.

Clay animation is extremley hard to do- and you accomplished this in a (to some degree) stylistic way. Improvements: More frames per second (smoother movement overall)- and legnth. If you kept up the techno groove music and made it a bit longer, maybe even an entire song, i bet you would be much more proud of your work and the viewers at newgrounds would be much more pleased.

keep trying

nothing special and kinda of confused me with its random ness