Awww
It'S BeAuTiFuL -sob- I LoVe iT. NiCe AniMaTiOn =)
Author Comments
First off, I am -not- gonna lie and say this is 'OMG MY FIRS EVA FLASH PLZ NO FLAMS' because that's a big lie. This is, however, the first animation I have finished, and one of the first I started seriously. Forgive the sheer amount of Tweening and several errors in the subtitles (the singer is hopefully gonna send me the correct lyrics later). This was created as a gift for Whirlwynd (the person who made this song), and I am pleased with it. Be honest with your reviews, but be polite please. Thank you.
Edit- Thanks for those who reviewed and voted to allow me to stay in the portal. I appreciate it.
Note about the song- To those who are suggesting to edit the high notes, I must point out that this is -not my song-. I will pass on your reccomendations to Whirlwynd next time I contact her however.
Edit- I have corrected the lyrics with the ones provided by the singer.
as your first
This was great, the image's goes well, with the song while depicting the song's Lyrics. Looking forward to your next installment, keep it up all Artist can be Animator's.
beautiful
You did very well on this. Although it was simple it was also complex in some ways, like when the peices would move into place. I loved how you drew the wings and their animation. I'm working with a character with wings myself.
Feniiku responds:
Thank you for your review.
I'm really glad you liked the wings, as they were awkward to animate correctly. I try keep wings as simple as I can because of that. They can still look impressive with less detail.
Nice
This was pretty high up on the 'pull on the heart-strings' scale. Overall, I liked it. My only suggestion is to make that song longer, and maybe stay off the highest notes, on account of those notes get my speakers all fuzzy.
Nice work again.
-Fox
Feniiku responds:
I'll pass on the message about the song to the singer. Thanks for the review ^_^
Very cool-looking
Song wasn't my particular cup of tea, hence the low music score, but your art style is fun to watch, and very pretty. I'd love to see more stuff like this in the future.
Feniiku responds:
Thank you for the review, I'm glad you think my art style is fun and pretty. I shall try to make similar stuff in the future. Cheers :D