THAT WAS WEIRD BUT FUNNY
It was pretty cool =D
the writing was good
The Writing was not bad maybe a little touch up on the animations and voices though
very good for your first time!
i thought it was hilarious! and the animation was very well made. very origional jokes. i especially loved the part about him getting his neopets account suspended! lol
ps. a little creative critisising. the jokes could use a little better timing, and i think you should save up and buy a new mic, every little bit helps.