the only part i laughed at was the "american monsters" part.. well just when the mummy went by..
very good for your first time!
i thought it was hilarious! and the animation was very well made. very origional jokes. i especially loved the part about him getting his neopets account suspended! lol
ps. a little creative critisising. the jokes could use a little better timing, and i think you should save up and buy a new mic, every little bit helps.
It was okay, but the great jokes were ruined by the horrid timing, and the overall bad voice-overers. My advice to you is that you tell your voice-actors to get a better microphone. It goes a long way.
I did every voice myself when I was just learning flash and used the microphone on a set of headphones. Ugh :(
I'm eventually going to re-dub this entire cartoon, when I'm less busy working on whole new ones.
Fairly shit, but it deserves a good review
This pilot was hilarous, i really think so. I know it was just made in a few seconds or so. But it was still hilarous, any dick can say this is 'The worse crap they have ever seen' but i like it, good job.
You know, I'm really not trying to be an ass, but that sucked dude. Your flash is good (it works) but your story is weak and your characters need more structure. Please keep trying though. I look forward to seeing more!