Good but...

I like the punchline used and done with here. It's very funny and well done.

Problem? Graphics/storyboard issue. Why would you submit unfinished work? You can't get too excited and show the world whats not done even though your proud of what you've got. And alot of people, when they give something almost done, don't finish it. Considering it old or boring and move on to something else. Finish first!

Secondly, you run in some serious anime-like flaws that are evident when someone wants to make something really easy. Go for the harder work. Instead of the bust-shot closeups and the wierd cut-aways that are really close or really far, go for the knee-up shot with the body movement. I worry you'll fall into steryo-typical anime theme rather than something original and to your own style.

This was pretty Good

I'm not really sure what I was viewing here but, it didn't look to bad and it seemed to have that sort of Out-of-Place humor feel. All in all it was pretty good and I look forward to seeing the finished product.

not entirely terible

i like this solely because of the song... the graphics could be a hell of alot better quality. because this is a preview, i'm voting insanely low on this because it doesn't deserve to be on the portal, make the full version and i will definitely give you a better vote. i give you support because i think this could be a great flash, it needs alot of work though. get to it!

Good

Don't take this the wrong way but I am opting to blam this since it is just a preview of what the finished product is going to be like.

That said, it is very well done. The problem most people have is with with good sound and you managed it very nicely. So hurry up and finish the real deal and I'll vote it for real.