it was good

it was good but it seemed to have some missing diolouge

Interestin'

Wow, such an interesting story, I hope it could have a continuation of it. Although the voice acting could have been smoother, the animation wasn't bad; because it was simple during action parts of the flash, it moved more smoothly; or at least it did to me; but you could put a tad more detail into that. Just a tad.

Bleh.

Eh, i couldn't bare watching it literally after 10 seconds, you need to improve on your animation and detail, I'd love to give this flash a chance but I just can't stand the animation, but it seemed like it was a decent/ok plotline.. just please improve the animation and get a little more familiar with flash.

ok but kindof childish

all the dialog sounded like it was from a disney cartoon, so it was pretty damn annoying. you started it off in the middle of a story and i had no idea what was going on. graphics were really good, but as i sed before, it sounded like a disney cartoon...

good

I liked this submission a lot, not least because I'm partial to stories of this nature. One complaint: the voices seemed to be either too loud or the music too soft, depending on how you look at it. If you fix that, and make a longer movie, then is will be one incredible series, should you continue it.