it was good
it was good but it seemed to have some missing diolouge
Author Comments
This is a brief introduction to the character of Harok, an avian bandit who's repaying his dead dad's debt by stealing from desert aripirates. The drawings are less detailed than most of my other Flashes because I attempted to concentrate more on the movement of the characters.
EDIT: Front page? Holy crap! HUGE thanks to whoever is responsible!
Interestin'
Wow, such an interesting story, I hope it could have a continuation of it. Although the voice acting could have been smoother, the animation wasn't bad; because it was simple during action parts of the flash, it moved more smoothly; or at least it did to me; but you could put a tad more detail into that. Just a tad.
Bleh.
Eh, i couldn't bare watching it literally after 10 seconds, you need to improve on your animation and detail, I'd love to give this flash a chance but I just can't stand the animation, but it seemed like it was a decent/ok plotline.. just please improve the animation and get a little more familiar with flash.
ok but kindof childish
all the dialog sounded like it was from a disney cartoon, so it was pretty damn annoying. you started it off in the middle of a story and i had no idea what was going on. graphics were really good, but as i sed before, it sounded like a disney cartoon...
good
I liked this submission a lot, not least because I'm partial to stories of this nature. One complaint: the voices seemed to be either too loud or the music too soft, depending on how you look at it. If you fix that, and make a longer movie, then is will be one incredible series, should you continue it.