not bad one

that was an alright tutorial. a little simple and basic, but sometimes the more basic hints and pointers are the most helpful and beneficial. i'm sure that a lot of people can definitely benefit from this tutorial you have here.

Not Hafl Bad

It would have been better to have some kind of pictures to look at, I must say. But, I've never seen a flash that was a tutorial. Good intentions, but, it needs just a few adjustments.

not the best tut

For someone who only has one other flash submission that's gotten into the portal, it might be a bit early for the tut.

Anyway...

Graphics were OK, but the navigation was poor (I couldn't find my way back sometimes), and the music would start playing over itself if I was on a link back to the title screen. Also, a few of the copy-paste text fields had very small text, which made it difficult to tell that it was in fact text to be copied.

I think fixing the navigation and music would be useful, as would a title that says exactly what you're going to present in the tut.

Not so good.

No offense, but this sucked. Hardly any of the scripts worked. Also, you didn't explain the scripts. If you did, I might have been able to fix them. Overall, pretty crappy.

Ok...

It was a good tutorial, but you didn't explain what exactly each strand of code does. You kinda just went "copy and paste and you're done!" A good tut would explain what the stuff does and would allow users to understand it and build from it. Just an afterthought.