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Syzygy

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My very first submission.


A little something i've been adding onto since december.


Enjoy... and please, if any, give me some creative criticism. Just no straight up {you suck} kinda comment.

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the big eyes

always the big eyes these days. i don't like the big eyes, i like what you did though.

nice one

that was a very nice animation. this one had some very nice graphics in it, good concept to it, nice music in it, your efforts were very nice and it offered some very nice and original entertainment.
i liked this one, it was good.

Great stuff!

I know you expected better score, you put a lot of effort in it and it's great, it's just that the evaluating system on this site is a piece of shit! 5/5 10/10. Make more!

How unusual....

You won't get too many people to understand this. This is like a silent film. And I suggest you pick up the tempo with it because it looks cool, like the trailer to a series.

Graphics are six because various camera angles were applied, though the detail on characters seemed lacking. There could be a little more going on. They are also well-drawn... so things are okay though things look plain.

Style is seven: traditional anime style. The concept is already fascinating.

Sound is five. I swear, while I'm unfamiliar with Bjork, I get the feeling that some other moody yet mild music could have been chosen for this. If you intend voice-overs, forget it. This might work without them.

Interactivity is a one (just a play button).

Humor is 0. This is a serious short, no doubt.

Overall, you get a 7. This should encourage you to continue, though take the detail and the music selection seriously.

Nice...

but there's room for improvement...probably more on the sounds department...a few tweaks and adjustment to your loading bar as well...I'm not sure with using music from Bjork...I mean I get we're you're going at but there's probably a better song selection out there...and the part where the music is cut off...the animation there went a bit choppy (or maybe it's just me)

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Votes
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Score
3.90 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 23, 2007
2:37 AM EDT