not bad one
that was an alright animation. a little short and random overall, but it was alright to watch, decent graphics and audio and it had an alright concept to it.
This is my second project for my Principles of Interaction class at college.
Based off a short story I wrote a while back of the same name, this flash tells the story of "Jim", who after 14 years has been fired from his job. This pushes him over the edge and he sneaks a bomb into his office the day he is supposed to be cleaning out his desk to demolish the entire building, and exact revenge.
This is by no means the complete story, but merely just the beginning of it. I'm not sure I'll continue it or not, possibly.
The interface is simple: use the buttons to navigate between scenes when prompted, or if you want to skip back and forth.
I used a track from Skillet's "Comatose" album for the ending theme. Though it is technically without permission, as this is a non profit submission and credit is given, I don't see a problem.
If something posted in the submission interests you (namely the presentation at the end credits), feel free to ask questions or research things out for yourself.
EDIT: The sound is a bit off. It works fine on my computer, but the lack of pre-loader might have done it in. Sorry all. :-D
not bad one
that was an alright animation. a little short and random overall, but it was alright to watch, decent graphics and audio and it had an alright concept to it.
Yeah. Hopefully I'll get something with a good length up sometime, maybe one of my comic book ideas turned animation.
Thanks for the review!
;K'
It has promise
I liked the intro, it just lacked the narraration, graphics and, sound to carry the idea through but could be good.
Thanks, I like the intro myself. :-)
Yeah, I'm sure I could do a better job on the narration. Or at least get someone else to do it.
Graphics and sound will improve with experience (hopefully) as well as time and effort. :-D
Thanks for the review!
;K'
ok...
it needed more. thats all.
Right. It was a linear story project with the whole interface thing for a class at college. It's definitely not a complete film by any stretch. See other response for more info, as well as the movie description.
Thanks for the review!
;K'
???????????WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
O.K DUDE!!! What was that? No plot, no point to it, I didn't get this at all... This sucked man come on! Fuck is was bad... Sorry for hard critisisim
It's all good. The plot is better explained in the movie's description, the animation itself only covers about two paragraphs of the actual short story (which is roughly four pages).
Basically, this is just when he sets the bomb in the office. He's worked there for 14 years and got fired, now he's looking for revenge by blowing up the building he worked in. The narration gives at least clues to it.
Thanks for the review
;K'