Pretty good try
Firstly, I'd like to say that i'm glad that my Handmation tutorial has helped people such as yourself with handmation, it is difficult, but keep trying at it. I liked this one, the first bit is a bit like Handmation 6 with the clay men. The lighting could do with a little bit of work, but the animation was pretty good, just try and take a bit more frame to prevent it being jumpy. I would also suggest making it a bit longer in future. Apart from a few things, I think you've done pretty well! Also, if you look in the last part of the Handmation tut. you will find a bit of info about the compression and the best settings, because I noticed in this one that there is a small screen and a big border. It is best to put the screen size at 300 x 300 and have the actual video covering the whole screen. I hope you decide to make more of these, drop me a PM for any further queries and I will be happy to help. Good job.
Thanks for the tip!
It's rather interesting. Not bad, but could be a little better by reducing the speed, but was still really good.
choppy but cool
the music speed up and slowed up alott but the effects were really cool, I like how your hand made the clay transform
All in all this movie is great, keep up the good work
Not as good as the real Handmations
The animation itself was okay but, the lighting was waaaay terrible. Way too much of it. Also, it got a bit shaky and jumpy at times. Also, was that play-doh you used? I gave you a 1 for style because well...it's not yours its Nick Deary's style and you didn't come close to his. The music was cool but, that really can't be attributed to you. 2 for violence because I'm pretty sure the clay man was killed. Um, your preloader didn't even work so 0 for interactivity, I didn't find it funny at all. Anyways, I would stick to other kinds of stop motion. I'd say Deary's got Handmation covered. Keep trying though, this probably will get on anyways so, I suppose this is a waste of time for me to write all of this. Who knows? Anyways, improve upon the picture quality a bit and do something a bit more original and you'll be good. You've got potential so, don't quit.
you can barely see it. and its too short. expand on it more.