Pretty good try
Firstly, I'd like to say that i'm glad that my Handmation tutorial has helped people such as yourself with handmation, it is difficult, but keep trying at it. I liked this one, the first bit is a bit like Handmation 6 with the clay men. The lighting could do with a little bit of work, but the animation was pretty good, just try and take a bit more frame to prevent it being jumpy. I would also suggest making it a bit longer in future. Apart from a few things, I think you've done pretty well! Also, if you look in the last part of the Handmation tut. you will find a bit of info about the compression and the best settings, because I noticed in this one that there is a small screen and a big border. It is best to put the screen size at 300 x 300 and have the actual video covering the whole screen. I hope you decide to make more of these, drop me a PM for any further queries and I will be happy to help. Good job.