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A Daze Work.com Episode 1

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This is the first of many A Daze Work.com episodes. It's part one of two parts, so check here or www.adazework.com for part two soon.

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Good Graphics

It looks like you put a lot of work into the graphics, especially the intro, but it definitely was lacking in color, (which I think would really add to the movie), humor, (nothing in the movie seemed funny, I don't know how to give constructive criticism on this except maybe make funnier scenarios/characters). The voicing also tended to be hard to hear at times, and the mouths seemed to be a little glitchy. I think your talents could've been put to better use.

ADWFinch responds:

Thanks for the review man. The color thing seems to be a big issue, however I am gonna keep it to the black and white, because it's a personal fav. Episode Two will be better, so check for it soon, wanna know what you think.
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Hello-o

all that video had from what I watched was profiles of one dimensional charactersand a joke ripped from family guy. the sound was pretty bad but the drawing was pretty good. I think it would be better with colour but i realize your going for a style thing.

ADWFinch responds:

I can see where you would think that was Family Guy, but when I was doing the voices I asked my buddy what would you do if you got kicked in the sack and well that is what he said, I would sit there moaning in pain...but thanks for the review, first episode was a little "sterile" i guess, but episode two will hopefully show more of the characters, so check back, I will be interested to hear what you think.

Yeah man

It was good, I agree it could have used color, but the way you had it worked fine too. I don't know I kind of like the black and white... Funny movie man the humor worked really well with the flash, hope to see more!

ADWFinch responds:

Thanks for checkin't it out. Black and white I feel really works best for this cartoon. Check back to see the next episode.

almost got something here

COLOR

COLOR COLOR COLOR COLOR COLOR COLOR COLOR COLOR COLOR COLOR COLOR COLOR !!!!!

and try writing out the story before hand... give you plot an actual direction...

hooah

ADWFinch responds:

I think you want color?!?! Sorry man, not in this toon. I like the Black and White.

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