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well. i must say that i found it rather entertaining. I like your sense of humor. and I think you did what you aimed to do. here is my only critique, after about 15 to 20 seconds of ... your repeated action. you can cut to an end screen. I know it may take a bit more work to say that your short is over but leaving it open for people to wait for the next thing might be one of the reasons that it isn't getting the greatest reviews. I think that it was good. very witty, and not at all what I was expecting to see. good job, a surprise like that is ALWAYS a good one. keep using your good wit and you could make some really funny flashes. dont pay any attention to those bad reviews, enjoy the good ones, and take everything that you can from the constructive ones. good luck.
remember : confuscius say he who stand on toilet is high on pot!