Liked

It was a smart idea to advertise your book through a flash short and i think you did a pretty good job of selling it. You were able to add some pretty strong jokes in here that made me crack up. The only thing that really let me down with this was the video transfer, as it looked like it was a transfer of the original flash short which made it appear as it would on a television. The voice overs for the flies were good but i would have liked subtitles. Overall a pretty cool advertising piece.

~H-J~

its ok

Just an ad, but done alright. It's extremely hard to make out what the fly is saying. Also they are "compound" eyes not "compact" eyes.

Funny!

This is a funny flash, because the flies are living in a turd house. The jokes are very funny, even though the animation could have a little more improvement in the graphic department. Great job!