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LL - Eraser's short 3

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Eraser, Explosive, Taco and Rocket went to an apple factory.
See what happens

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Took me: 1 week and 2 days to make

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good

And after soo long time explosive is back

Not as funny as i thought it would be

This was another solid Lock short from you Eraser,i like the silly concept of it and the design on the damaged Eraser Lock from the explosion was quite good and the story behind the factory was solid too,for a flash short this was pretty long cause it was like around 2 minutes long but overall i didn't find it as funny as i thought i would but it was still a good Lock flash to watch.

Voices were very annoying...

It is a good plot, but the sound is killing me. Very humorous, and I suggest that the animation could have been somewhat better. Overall...better than what some people did!

EraserLock responds:

Thank you. The lack of voice actors mean speakonia. A device that generates computer voices.

Liked

Well i was loving how well this flash was set out, the way you had them drop from the sky and then had explosive explain what had happened before they got there was a cool idea. The animation for all of the characters were good and the character design for eraser was especially cute. I liked the simple background for the outside part but i liked the interior of the house more because of that awesome picture of the two locks on the wall. The ending was the only real downer for me, i didnt think it was a bad ending, it just made me upset.

~H-J~

EraserLock responds:

Thank you for your review! I realy enhoy looking at a review like yours.

BTW the ending was only there because I wanted explosive to return to Lock Legion and he did it. Mission successful.

<6

that's right, <6
<3 is far to little
=D

EraserLock responds:

Much love to you too explosive <3

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Mar 14, 2007
2:10 PM EDT
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Comedy - Original
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