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Its live action squirrel with big balls
This was a boring (but thankfully short) flash.
Honestly, I kind of expected this flash to be bad, given the file size. However, this was even worse than I expected. Here's why:
Graphics: 0/10. Okay, what have here? Two still images next to each other, and a pointer that was obviously looped back and forth between two places. This is extremely basic, and you can improve here by adding more motion to the main characters, adding a common background for both of the characters, and making the characters look more realistic (without being pictures).
Style: 0/10. There was absolutely no plot or storyline, and there was nothing on the screen to keep me interested. In addition, the flash was way too short to have anything significant happen. I can't think of any situation where a 5-second long flash (especially one that is not looped) can have any development.
However, you can keep one element of your style and make this flash great: the single line. If you create a interesting environment, add dramatic music and non-verbal actions, and have it build up to one, crucial line, you could end up with a great flash. Heck, there are lots of flashes with no dialogue at all, but have lots of non-verbal communication, and end up being very well made.
My point here is that the style has a lot of room for improvement, and you could make a great flash by considering some of the suggestions here.
Sound: 5/10. There was one line in Speakonia. It sounded decent, but the flash was too short to have good dialogue.
Overall: 0/10. This flash was definitely bad. There was plenty to improve upon here, most notably in the graphics and style. (Check above for more details.) Flash doesn't have to be something that you put only 10 minutes into; if you put a lot more time into it, you can end up with a truly great piece of art.
AWSOME! I AM THE FIRST TO REVIEW THIS!!!!
GREAT JOB MAN!!! That was one of the best live action squil flashes EVER!
KITTY KREW ALL THE WAY!!!!!!!
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