Hmmm

The graphics were nice and detailed
The animation was pretty stiff
The music was alright
The voice acting was average
The humor was not all that

Good stuff just not really using all your potential.

That was a good start

But the charicters where very stationary. If you drew them yourself and photoshoped them you did good at that but try stepping it up by maybe uploading them and then going over them again with flash. You dont have to nessesarily redraw them you could just go over the origanal. Then model them to what you want. But other than that. Keep up the good work!