This musta took a looooooo0ooooong time to make!

holy hell dude! that was very great, loved the scene where he fought the succubus. you should make mooree!

nice

i got a soft spot for claymations probably cause thats how i first learned how to animate anyhoo whered you get that training montage music that was in a great south park episode and i've been lookin all over for it if you could tell me that would be awsome

Not bad at all

hey, guess what, I thought I was going to blam this one.. but it actually deserves to be watched... you pourred time into this and it is soo worth it..
I liked it...so thnx 4 the effort and know that I saw it twice cuz it was actually funny

In my personal opinion, you should keep working on the "clay skills" and the result will b amuzing... little tip, go play clay fighters, some of those thingies u can play w. can also be made and it wuld b sick 2 c em fight on an animation

thumbs up

Great Claymation!

I've seen many claymations, basically, so this to me was great. Is this also on YouTube? I kinda noticed the format and text and it just reminded me of movies for YouTube and the like.

Good, but needs improvement

This was a pretty good flash. Contrary to what the last reviewer said, I think your models are actually quite well-done. However, there are some other issues you need to fix.

One is framerate, as others have said. Your movie should flow smoothly, with something like 15 fps being minimum and about 25 being optimal. That's a lot of work, but it would greatly improve the end results.

Another simple thing you can do to improve the movie is to make the camera more steady. Whether this means buying a tripod (mini tripods aren't too expensive) or rigging something up (set the camera on some books or a box, or something like that) it would greatly improve the quality.

I agree with the last reviewer that you should try to find someone else to help with voices, so that there is more variety.

Also, you could try making the intro a little more interesting, and make the music flow better. The guitar-playing shouldn't have stopped during the title screen, but rather have gone on playing through that whole section, for example.

If it is worth it to you, it would be nice to see your animations captured with a better camer, also, and your audio captured with a better mic.

There's a lot of potential here for some really good claymation, so keep up the good work and I'll be watching for another from you!