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Well im going to back track on this series from the start but i thought that you did this one alright. I thought that it was a simple idea and i like how you gave alot of room for the build up, maybe following the victim from the sky would add an extra dimensioin to this but then again that would probably take away from the originality of this as i can see that you were trying to be unique by holding the same scene for the whole duration of the flash, good work.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)