This is not a safe flash
I commend you on attempting to make a worth while flash and I did like the sort of silent film style but there are a couple of issues I had with the product:
First the grammatical errors are very distracting from the rest of the product and make it difficult to follow.
Second, the battle scene was a little too drawn out with the minor detail taken to it. By all means keep it in, but shorten it a bit.
Third and most importantly, while I can appreciate your tribute to the film, using copyrighted images could prove to be extremely hazardous for you and Newgrounds. Especially if those images are copyrighted by a company like Square-unix, which has been rather ruthless in the past with these matters.
Again I like your style and hope to see more from you in the future, but please take what I have said into consideration.