I loved it. Where did you find the song you used for the credits? It was basically amazing. Hope you have more coming soon!
The intro will make you shit bricks, which is enough to make you keep watching. Voice acting isn't that good, but the story compensates for it.
dont you just love the world we live in? the shitsplat that is a shopping mall.
hats off that was amazing
yeah, I remeber seeing your first draft. this added onto it really well. Good job.