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Ha...

I really think it was too short to pass. Overall it's fine, but there isn't anything to it. I don't need to give you advice but I will anyway. It's obvious really, add more phrases into a single flash.

The idea is good anyway. I guess that counts for something.

Spinister responds:

I only needed something that can fill up my submission list whenever I don't have anything else ready. I COULD do better, but I don't really feel like it right now.

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im sure it says somewhere in the guidelines that say's dont make crappy flash movies about them. Nice char though ^-^

~DEFF

Very good lesson

Which I will carefully follow. I have to say, with all due respect, that this movie definitely didn't please me at all. In fact, it would be pretty accurate to say it wasn't really a movie at all in my humble opinion. Let me tell you why :

- The graphics, even though it featured a very well drawn character ... were exclusively constituted of that very character, which makes it a way too short "animation". I don't think there can be animation without animation. So my recommendation on further improvement would be to think about animating your flash, putting content.

I would really like to give you my opinion about the rest of the movie, but sadly I can't, because there is nothing else in the movie. So here's my conclusion : this movie isn't worth much, as it shows no effort at all. You have to take time to make a good animation, which you apparently didn't. So I hope you will do better next time.

Spinister responds:

Good, keep it up!

You're a wise man

Very wise words. Make more of these.

I agree.

I agree but I thought you were the bad dude of the portal also make the animation better it was good to know that some users are changing.

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Uploaded
Feb 22, 2007
6:27 PM EST