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jeje just kiding any way keep up with the good work
Thankies. : )
also, do u play lineage 2, because there was a soulshot sound when he falls LOL
Nah, I've never played it but seen poeple play itt. Thanks for the heads up on that though. I never noticed. lol
enjoyable watch, though
I liked the way you just threw us straight into the animation without an 'intro'.
I didn't feel the art was a massive step up. Your hands were better and the sleeveless duder's lineless arms are definitely a nicer style. But it's only evolved as I'd hope to see over the course of a beginner's series. Hardly cause for a massive celebration.
I felt the backgrounds were a massive step up - nothing stood out as pretty and nothing complex was there to challenge you, but compared to last time - where elements of the barn stood out as ugly - it's a big improvement.
My only criticism graphically was the end-screen with the slightly sloppy white 'highlight' lines on the spiky thing.
Suggestions would be to try giving the guys shading, maybe try removing thin lines altogether... the usual. Experiment and continue trying out new styles until you decide on what works best for you.
The boobies made me smile.
The repeated breaks to flash up a word or two made me chuckle. I think you could have gone further, maybe repeating that joke a couple more times, to get it even more ridiculous.
Anyway, it was an enjoyable watch, though not quite as chucklesome as its predecessor. No real flaws, but the repeating flashing words just weren't as funny as the emo glasses.
Hmmm, I'll try harder and think more on the jokes in future movies. Maybe I'll get a few poeple to watch it over before submitting to see if I can improve any jokes. Thanks.
I'll also add some shading to the characters for depth and stuff.
Ok, the graphics are slightly better in this episode. Decent voice acting as well.
A whole episode dedicated to the slight improvement of the graphics? I'm not sure they are even a whole lot different, but whatever. I wasn't too entertained by this for that reason, I think you should have worked a little more and had an actual storyline.
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Yeah this didn't have a storyline at all really. Shorts really are just about randomness I think. This flash was more of a experiment to see how flash pro 8 works for me I think.
This has proven everything I wrote in my last review... well, except for the plot thing, but this was only a short.
The graphics have improved and so has the sound (although no bad guy this time) I guess the next step is to make a longer movie, possibly in a series? Would you be willing to give us that gratification?
Still, keep on improving and good luck with your next project
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Thanks agian. Yeah I'm turning this into a series. I got alot of scripts and I'm workin' hard. Trust me you'll love The Duders series.