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OwnageInTheFlesh [I/C]

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It's not done but ill be sure to submit it when it's complete. constructive critisism greaty apriciated. :)

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it's alright.

other then being quite short as you have said, The only real problem I have is that there are already so many Movies that do the same exact thing. with the stick-people. I'd think it would be neat if someone would do this with actual, uh, non-stick people, but i understand that's pretty hard to do. I liked the Music, i thought it went well with the movie. other then it not being Original, I thought it was pretty well-made.

preety good

This is short but the movement is smooth , make a longer one

Promising.

Not bad, but needs work. What I did like was the quality of the figures themselves, but I was disappointed at the animation. To improve, I would suggest spending more time animating individual frames, creating smoother, more intense action and dropping the music for something a little more fitting. A storyline and original backdrop wouldn't hurt either. Good luck in the future, you could turn out to be something if you work at it.

Good

I liked it. Decent flash, for sure. It was pretty slow, compared to a lot of stick fights I've seen. IT should be pretty simple to speed up the flash, right?
Well drawn. A little more variety, a few more clobbering noises, and you've got a great cartoon on your hands.
Good job.

DB-Anims responds:

Ill kepp that in mind. thank you.

it made me giggle

i liek where its going but you need mroe soudn effects and bigger sticks with a better enviroment. maybe add some weapons.

i wouldnt mind joining up and helping out with some ideas and maybe ill help out with soem animation.

just pm me

annnyway i like what i saw .

DB-Anims responds:

i wouldnt mind teaming up, but weapons dont add well to an animation. like, BOOM, your dead. BOOM, your dead. but i wouldnt mind teaming.

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Score
3.29 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 15, 2007
8:08 PM EST