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Wow, never thought I'd get this far.
This was a pain in the ass to make but I had fun with it.
NO FLAMING OR HATING AND YES I AM A FLASH NOOB DEAL WITH IT.
So, well um, enjoy my work.
Nice for a first flash
It was a nice job for a first flash. And not to mention i normally don't like sprite movies. I did remind me about .hack for some reason, that whole realistic VR world thing, and with that 'hacker'. Nice story. But i think that you might want to improve that 'go further' button in the dialog (?) window. Oh, and the sound was good too. One of the first movies like these i saw with some different music instead of just one the same. Il be expecting the next one =)
Very well done.
For a first flash, you've done an outstanding job on this. It had a decent storyline, the sprites weren't all.. blurty, they actually looked very well. The music gets repetitive but goes well with the overall flow of it. All in all you did a good job on the flash, keep it up!
Okay, here's the template on how I based my points.
Graphics: 5, it was well done, but everything could be better.
Style: 7, You see these kinds of flashes a lot, but I just can't get enough of them, I like them lots!
Sound: 8, kind of repetitive, but it flowed very well with the flash.
Violence: 5, not all that violent, but it did show in your flash.
Interactivity: 8, lots of things to click on it, just the fact that it was all for the same thing, it was nice of you to put them there though. :-)
Humor: 1, eh, not funny, who cares?
Improvement: Well, not much for me to tell you on improving, you did basically as good as it's gonna get for a sprite flash, your storyline was good (and even if it wasn't, who am I to tell you to change YOUR flash to suit me better?), I think if you had some more character development and made the "next" buttons look 'prettier', you'd do an outstanding job for your episode 2!
Keep it up!!
... It's not 'technicle' but 'technical'
Just pointed you to the facts bro :)
good for a first sprte animation
im not one of those, SPRITES SUCK guys because a majority of my animation are sprite flashs, and they may never rate as high as this
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