Nice for a first flash

It was a nice job for a first flash. And not to mention i normally don't like sprite movies. I did remind me about .hack for some reason, that whole realistic VR world thing, and with that 'hacker'. Nice story. But i think that you might want to improve that 'go further' button in the dialog (?) window. Oh, and the sound was good too. One of the first movies like these i saw with some different music instead of just one the same. Il be expecting the next one =)

Very well done.

For a first flash, you've done an outstanding job on this. It had a decent storyline, the sprites weren't all.. blurty, they actually looked very well. The music gets repetitive but goes well with the overall flow of it. All in all you did a good job on the flash, keep it up!

Okay, here's the template on how I based my points.

Graphics: 5, it was well done, but everything could be better.

Style: 7, You see these kinds of flashes a lot, but I just can't get enough of them, I like them lots!

Sound: 8, kind of repetitive, but it flowed very well with the flash.

Violence: 5, not all that violent, but it did show in your flash.

Interactivity: 8, lots of things to click on it, just the fact that it was all for the same thing, it was nice of you to put them there though. :-)

Humor: 1, eh, not funny, who cares?

Improvement: Well, not much for me to tell you on improving, you did basically as good as it's gonna get for a sprite flash, your storyline was good (and even if it wasn't, who am I to tell you to change YOUR flash to suit me better?), I think if you had some more character development and made the "next" buttons look 'prettier', you'd do an outstanding job for your episode 2!

Keep it up!!

~Leonard

actually...

... It's not 'technicle' but 'technical'
Just pointed you to the facts bro :)

good for a first sprte animation

im not one of those, SPRITES SUCK guys because a majority of my animation are sprite flashs, and they may never rate as high as this