so cool
i really liked it man i was like o snap this boy is gonna die then the main character shot him and it was...so awesome XD neway i thought it was awesome ^_^
Author Comments
Hi! everybody. This is my first submit of newgrounds because I've nothing to do , and to make sure I can do something for this site , and for this valentine's day. Please read while you're loading the movie
I created this movie in order to present the Flash workshop for computer class in my school , yep! , that's mean I'm a rookie. I haven't ever touch the program before , so I have to start from the beginning while making this.
Graphic were simple , I mean , I haven't use much animation because I can't do it , and I'm working all alone , like drawing charactor or background and make them to move. So it ends up little strange, sorry.
Anyway , HAPPY VALENTINE everyone!
not too shabby
I liked it. The animation was pretty jerky at times, but that's to be expected from a beginner. One thing you can improve on is the positioning of your characters. The flash had a lot of standing, which is okay, but throwing in a couple of different positions can help eliminate the tension that comes from constant activity. A good place for this kind of thing would have been the photograph. Have the two of them sitting on a hill together. Not only would it be a different pose, but showing us that they are relaxed and happy together tells us that they are probably still a couple. This makes the blow all the harder when she dumps him. Other than that, you did well. The fight scene was good, and I was really impressed with the timing for the main character. I don't want to spoil anything for readers, so I wont say anything in particular in that regard, but Kudos. Giving her the valentine right then was pretty funny too.
Good job
That was pretty good for your first flash, only problem with it was the sound problems. Next time either loop the music or use longer songs then just randomly cutting the song.
Keep it up
I actualy like it, but there is a point I dont like. I would also give her a shot for being stupid, oh well it's just me.
man o man
that animation rocked my socks off could of found better sounds instead of them just cutting off but apart from that for a first flash submission it is very good