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Hello, this is a test of some things ive been working on... i would like any criticism you can give me (good and bad) and or helpful tips...
><....i is afraid now
ur dethklok vid was way way way betr.nice ff7 battle music but overall tis just sucked
you dont wanna know...
hahaha no this is not cool i had a freind who had a seizure watching this kind of crap...just kidding you POS
-that one kid you talk to in that one class
Could be good
Well, the animation could really lead into something if you put a decent amount of effort into it.
The idea was simple, it's been done before alot... so you need to find a way to make it your own, create something unique... or something people don't see coming.
The graphics were simple, nothing spectacular... just simple. If you want to use sticks, you'll need to up their animation fluency and their other features (armour, swords), just for a better feel.
This time round, the animation was nice, fluent... nothing glitchy. Overall I think this was a great first submission, and you really have a bar to progress on.
Best of luck!
But the charachter design is a little rough, although the animation was smooth. I loved the use of the FF7 boss battle remix (yes, I'm nerdy enoguh to tell that), and if you submit the full version with better graphics, I'm sure you could make front page work.
u really think i can make front page work...thanks man
you should have them go on some big quest or something
oh dont worry, they will be...
Four dwarven leaders in search for ancient treasure.
A Mystery Noir Series... Episode 6: Detective Swift confronts The Big Bad Wolf
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