What on earth was that?

Befor I write this review let me say that I like you Frenzy. I think you're a cool guy and I don't mean to offend you.

(- The Good -)

Errm the sound effects were rather good and insync. The music also rocked. I liked the eerie panting thing at the beggining and you had a proper preloader and an opening.

(- The Bad -)

They are Sticks... Sticks are crap... The flash was confusing and unrealistic. How could it be 10 times better than your last? The menu was untidy and the sticks didn't even have faces. It's also far too short. Who the hell is McGregor? What is going on? You need to answer all these questions in the beginning. And WTF was that KM doing in the background. Hidden meaning?

(-- Overall --)

This was disappointing, take the preloader and the opening, take the story and start fresh. But take your time and don't use sticks.

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(--- Review Request Club ---)

WTF?

Improve
The graphics suck ass. Draw some good guns and blood. Make some good animation instead of crappy tweening (at least make it look good) Add some eerie music to set a mood. The first minefield continued is very weird. The storyline is all mixed up to me. Say what that green thing is, I thought it was a grenade but it was not. Also add a lil more humor (the stickmen spinning around on the TV was funny)

2/5
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K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline is developing in this episode, which is cool. It is a pretty interesting story. Not the best, but still worth watching. The sound effects and music were good throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
Basically what I said about the last episode. You need to add some more to this graphically. You should definitely draw some more backgrounds to make up for the pretty poor animations and drawings.

Review Request Club

Not bad.

with better graphics and sound it could be a popular flash.
i like the storyline u made for it now all it needs to be is a bit longer

it was... an attempt at a stick movie

you could've done alot better with this movie, i mean the story was ok, but the scenes were too quick and if you miss a little you won't get the whole story, plus the killing wasn't that good. all it showed was crudely drawn red marker on a stick figure. the graphics could've been better cause it would've been better if you made it look more 3d and if the killing was actually killing. if you improve this video, it might survive in the portal, hell it might even get some good reviews, but until then you might have to worry about this getting blammed cause it's not as good as it could've been.