hi guys!!! well, this is my first flash ever, i hope you like it. it was very hard to make it but i finally finish it. i made this character a long time ago and now i decided to give it a try and animate her, hope you like it and i hope i can hear some comments. decrease the quality of the movie if you have a slow machine.
nice one
that was a nice animation. your drawings were very nice.... you definitely have some nice drawing talents. i didn't care too much for the song in this one... i found it to be a little bit sappy, but i did enjoy this one either way.... especially your drawings. you show a lot of potential, i look forward to seeing more from you in the near future.
good
That had some nice animation, alot of effort. But I'm sorry to say I found it incredibly annoying. Very clean art anyways
4/5
thanks dude!! I´m sorry you found it annoying, maybe it was the fact that it was a more or less corny song??? anyway thanks for taking time to check it i´ll try to do it a lot better next time!!!
Brilliant
The graphics were excelent, the sound was good , at the end when the rithm got considerably faster her movements speeded up to a lil inhumane...but it was still briliant ...
i´l try to keep the speed in a more human level next time, thanks for checking it out!!!!
First flash? Wow!
_Good Points_
For your first flash this was extremely good. The synching of animation to the music was also very good and as for the fbf, you seem to have mastered the basics. The song seemed to have fitted the animation (even though I hated the song - but that's just my taste of music don't worry about it. And I'm not bringing down the mark on music because of that.)
_Bad Points_
Sorry to say but I didn't like the character too much, the colours were pretty horrible. You used the same movie clip over and over which made it repetative and slightly boring to watch (even though the movie clip you made was really good.) Could have added more detail in general really.
_Overall_
For your first animation it was fantastic! I'd love to see you make a animated story I think you could pull that off fantastically as you do have a lot of talent. Nice one.
~LazyFeet
thank you for your great advise buddy!!! this is the kind of things that help you to improve, i had some problems chosing the colors i thought they were ok, but i guess i should be more carefull next time,and many dudes have complained about the cycles repeated. so i´ll try to not do this again. thanks for your advice!!!!
Confusing.
I find this flash to have incredibly incosistant graphics. Usually trade marks of art theift. Seriously, where to begin... how about the eyes... I can't even begin to describe how weird they look. Could the irises be any bigger and poorly placed? Not to mention the three frame animation period. Seems the father away you get the lower the detail. This all around sucks. I don't care what anyone else says. I should also note all the repeating scenes. Try at the very least to use your same images in different frame orders. Its like watching the Flinstones or classic Spiderman.
Do your own drawing not ripping other peoples. Its too obvious how the art styles change throughout the flash.
thank you very much for your comments, really bad or good no mather everything is completly great in order to improve so i´ll try to explain some of the problems:
first of all, nope believe it or not the character is NOT ripped off from nobody, i created that character more than 10 years ago, yes there are some terrible mistakes i know and i can only say that this was must of all because as i said this is my first flash, I know this is no excuse but for me it was very hard to create everything with the mouse and with a program that i´m trying to dominate. finally yes there are a lot of scenes that are repeated, but i think that´s something that even great works like the flintstones (as you said) or great anime series are guilty of, i have seen some great masterpieces here in newgrounds who are guilty of the same crime, but as i said thanks for taking the time to tell me what was wrong . next time ill try to do my best and improve it.