Not too bad
You really don't have a bad flash, ya know? The only thing is it should be bigger (it might just be my computer) and seriously needs some voice overs. If you do those it'll be just fine, because you have somewhat funny dialog here.
not the best...but not the worst....5/10 from me
Something not right about preloader
You preloader is on its side the bar would be fine but you need to move the picture with it really good luck with the animations though