okay one
that was an okay animation. pretty short and random overall, but your efforts were alright and it was okay to watch. i think that this one could've been better if it was longer, but oh well.
Author Comments
This cartoon's fairly short, and with much less gore than my previous attempts. Yeah, I probably could have done it with a proper man instead of a stick, but hey, whatever. I don't know if you can see properly what the fly does at the end. This is my first submitted carton in AEONS
Hotfoot-Wookie responds:
Thanks for the revew, I might remake it with a proper dude rather than just a stick figure, if I get the time.
Pretty funny
I thought it was pretty funny. Although, was it me, or was the fly cheating. It looked like he marked two when the guy fell. That damn fly, he's counting one for two (or something). I also liked your response to vvvv ThorkGonsam's review vvvv. Nice physics lesson :D Anyway, good job!
Hotfoot-Wookie responds:
Yeah, I guess I messed up the marking scheme a little bit. Ah well, this just shows you that you can never trust flies...
not that good
Its funny but but it would be better with a bit more of a storyline
The animation was nice but i dont get why the guy fell apart in mid air
sound effects were good but didnt flow well with the animation.
Put a bit more effort and I bet it could be a 10/10
Hotfoot-Wookie responds:
Yeah, I was just trying to whip something up really quickly, I did it in a really short space of times. I suppose that the Velocity times Speed divided by his Total Body Mass caused his thin, poorly spaced limbs to tear apart. THe sound effects were a little screwy because there was a bit where I was making it and a load of the frames got messed up, and I had to remake a large chunk in the middle, so things were compeltely organised in the end. Thanks for your review and fair score
Why....
Does the fly get two marks for one guy?
Hotfoot-Wookie responds:
He puts in the fourth mark, and then crosses off the line, because it's a full row. At least I Think that that's how it works...
Dont really know...
I dunno what to say... what is this meant to be about? i makes no sense. Try and get a storyline or something of that sort involved. I thought the animation on the stickman was really good though.
Hotfoot-Wookie responds:
Why thank you for your input, sincerely. Ah, one day my dad was like, "You're always making violent cartoons, I'd like to see a nice one" and although this one turned out still fairly violent, I thought I might as well whip one up quicksmart, and I dunno why I'm submitting it really, I suppose I just wanted to see if it was actually good