Impressing on how much time given
Sure, the flash has everything I look for in a flash. It has a very common sense of art style. It has an interesting story, making it not repetitive. The thing that amazes me though is that you made such a great flash in only a week.
P.S. All of the people who have commented and given a low score don't have any work done on their accounts so don't let them get to you.
umm it was done alright but the author has to put more effort into his work
just too amateur
It was a 1 week project that I did for a friend in my spare time. I know it's not quite the polished animation that my more recent submissions are, and that I could have put much more effort into it, but you don't have to destroy my review score with a 2 just because I cut some corners.
There are much worse animations that make it onto the portal; save your two's for those.
Not bad lol
Hi its fekalist here again and i also like this submission of yours,you make good flashes but they could have better audio...
Well, at least I'm glad you like the animation. For the animations I've submitted so far, the focus has been on the animation, and not neccessarily the audio. They have just been little tunes I found in the audio portal that I found particularly fitting.
But I am currently working on an animation where the primary focus is the audio, and it should be done sometime around the end of the summer. So check back as I will be writing updates on my new improved profile as to how that animation is going. I'm sure you will like it if you like these little simple things I've done so far.
nice use of perspective
I felt the artist did a nice job using perspective and multiple planes. I enjoy his artistic style; it is consistent and easy on the eye.
Well thank you. I've never had anyone comment that my style is easy on the eyes. I'm glad you enjoyed my use of layers to create depth during the camera pans.
Anyway, thanks for your nice comments.
its ok but i htink u coulove done better on the animation if it had better animation i think it would be great
Well, I was trying to make directorial decisions to keep it simple and to the point, using camera movement as the key cinematic element to really create the exact mise-en-scene that would cause the audience to immediately understand that it was a cliche japanese style monster attack on a metropolitan area, and then be surprised by the abrupt and unexpected ending.
But, you know, you're absolutely right. Better animation would have made it better.
(Oh, and just to let you know, the period was invented as a puncuation mark hundreds of years ago.)