Lol.

Pretty funny. Gotta love the Austrian accent (lol). If u want sm tips, u should add subs: it's pretty hard to understand (I had to watch it once more). GG-

Hmm...

Well, the visuals at the start were nice, they showed some progression. But then I saw the "To lazy to animate part".

You would of been getting a much better score if it wern't for this horseshit. The animation looked much better than your previous work (beleive me, ive seen em all), and the sound was nicer. The plot had potential too, but this sorta killed it for me.

Anyway, good luck with your series.

not bad

needs a bit of work though keep at it man

In 1945, a young girl named katu lata kulu came over to America in a grey boat from Africa. A mysterious man killed her by cutting the word "LATUALATUKA" into her back. now that you have read this message, she will come to your house on a full moon and steal your soul unless you follow these directions:

.1. Retype this message as a comment for 3 other video

im not sure

It's a good start i'll give you that. Perhaps you could try improving the graphics a little (i know, easier said than done lol) but ok for now.

Damn my superstition!

Weird......

In 1945, a young girl named katu lata kulu came over to America in a grey boat from Africa. A mysterious man killed her by cutting the word "LATUALATUKA" into her back. now that you have read this message, she will come to your house on a full moon and steal your soul unless you follow these directions:

.1. Retype this message as a comment for 3 other video

Seriously, man, check the misspellings

I'll help you out with the right way some lines should be:
"He had an operation in his head"
"and wants to clone himself"
"the key to destroy humanity"
"That would take too much time to animate, so I am skipping it"
This isn't a misspelling, but it's kinda the same: the detective's gun isn't pointed at the experiment, but he still shoots the creep. What?

The best graphics in this were focused on the stick guys, and that was some pretty sweet animation. It looks to me like a modification of the style used in the Castle series, of recent front page fame. Same tall body, same arms and torso both coming out of the head. Any influence there?
The other graphics weren't that hot, especially the inside of the car. They need polishing and smoother animation.

I don't know what your motivation was, but some parts of this made me laugh: The "This would take too long to animate, so I skipped it" part, and the abrupt change in style right after that. And the mumbled phone conversation that the detective somehow understands. "Grgrngmbldna - right." Made me laugh. Ha!

Also, the page in the beginning explaining everything is fine - gross as all get-out, but still fine - though it could be better if it was animated like the other bits of information in the beginning ("Something's in my head" and all that)

The music was awesome.

Too much time spent on the old scientist guy.