+ Some good sounds and voices
+ Some OK art and animation
-Some poor sounds
-Artwise its some good pics mixed with scribble
You need to study the final result over and over before submitting- preferably with honest reviews by friends first.
Storywise I think you are assuming a lot of people's ability to understand what is going on. Again, talk it through with people who DON'T already know about this series.
This has considerable potential- please make it the best you can.