After seeing your short "swoosh", I decided to take a gander at some o' yo' other flash animations. Although simply made, I like the flow of these shorts. With a little more cleaning up they could be both graphically and structurally impressive, but I laughed anyway because of the funny scene cuts.
Good for a starter
a cool and very funny video, good job for a first timer
Pretty good for a beginner
You're startin' off a lot better than a lot of other people.
For a first animation, that's pretty good.
Stick with it, man, and you're sure to get better with more experience and whatnot.
For a first time,this is quite good
nice, you colored it > 6
your drawing aint bad too
for violence, i know what youre trying to depict. > 7
the play button is an interactive gizmo. > 1
seriously man i dinae laugh > 0
Pretty good. Funny but work on the graphics abit... Sound: Well you could hear the air but thatsw what my mic does aswell but not too bad good voices!!