lmao

You are very funny, my friend.

a charming story.

I kinda liked the plot. It was kinda sweet and I find it funny to imagine a cat's bravery being brought upon by increased self-awareness.

However, though the graphics aren't bad in themselves, I really disliked the whole animation style.

I felt that for this kind of cartoon, I needed to empaphise with Sherbert and believe in him as a character. With all the tweening you did and limited redrawing, I could rarely properly tell what Sherbert was actually feeling.

Also, the synching to the beat of the tune was a bit off.

Still, a charming story.

Good

+Good art
+good animation
+funny- some nice ideas in there

I felt the mice were rather lame- they didn't really DO much they were a bit of a cop out- really just copy the picture, then dont bother.
its good, though, I enjoyed it. the music and the internet!

Go and watch some classic cartoons critically. Study how they get their laughs, the sounds and music blend etc. make them even better.

Poor Sherbert, he is just doing his job but Tom doesn't look pleased.

You have the basic abililty and with the added support of Sherbert fans you can realy clean up.

Good

-Good-
The graphics were done well in this flash although I think you should of redrawn some of the pictures you used(Like the tank logo etc.). The music was definitly a strong point in this flash. There was a little humor in this movie. My favorite being when you see the cat using google.

-Bad-
I would of realy liked to see more sound effects in this flash. Alot of cartoony sounds would have went great with this.

-Overall-
A good flash. Nice work.

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K

^^Good Points^^
A good movie overall and a good effort. The storyline was pretty funny, a good battle between the cat and mouse. I thought the music was the best part, good choices throughout, same with the sound effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just try to smooth up the animations a bit throughout this, and maybe some more sound effects to enhance this a bit.

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