This series is a truly awesome one. Great work!
Needs work my good sir!
It looks like you used the pencil tool to draw everything. Or at least, you used what appear to be very... skinny... undetailed drawings. Especially the houses and backgrounds.
It was watchable, but not so watchable that I finished it. You, and whoever else voiceacts for it, need to learn how to record properly. It's like they're voiceacting from across the room, instead of in front of the microphone. It's all mumbling as well.
Other than that, it was a decent animation, and I 3'd it.
I like how you incoporated music from punk-o-matic into your flash.