okay
overall i liked it but i think it still needs some work...
don't get me wrong it is good an' all but i felt like it wasn't fast paced enough and by the looks of it it seems that you are capable of doing much better
Author Comments
This is my very first flash movie I've ever made, it's pretty good quality for a first-ever. It's a music video style format showing action scenes to music. I've worked very hard on it, about 3 weeks and I've learned a lot about making flash movies. I hope to submit more in the near future. I would love to get some tips and suggestions any of you guys have. Enjoy!
M2k3 responds:
Thanks, yeah I would've liked to add a lot more stuff and make the quality better but I simply didn't have the time. This is for a project in my Communications Technology class and we were given 3 weeks to go from never using flash before to making a 60 second animation. I'll definitely take everyone's comments into consideration because I know there's lots I can improve on.
damn good for a first 1
really good graphics, and all around pretty good. not really any story line or anything though. and im not to sure of the reason their all killin eachother but the graphics are pretty good.
Good for your first
This is really good for your first flash in my opinion, solid graphics and good animation, keep up the good work!
Nice
Pretty good for your first flash animation. I see you put a ton of effort into it. If anything you could improve onto this flash, see if you can get the helicopter's propellers to move at all.. that would be kinda of a challenge to get a loop going for it.
But other than that, you really did a great job!
M2k3 responds:
I was trying to get those propellers animated but since I had a 3 week time frame to make it I decided to make them not animated and work more on learning actionscript. I'll definitely work on figuring out how to get those looking nice though.
Really good
Really good animation and everything.
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