awn....

* smoking and whatch the flash :/// *

Good message

I understand the message you're trying to convey with your movie and the song you chose for it is great. The song helps set the mood of the movie which is why I gave it a decent rating.

Your crusade is a noble one and I wish you good luck.

Could have been better

Well, I understand your feelings, and its a good thing that you decided to work on something that is close to your hearth.

That been said, I didn't liked that much. The graphics could have been better, the type of font that you used wasn't the best choice (couldn't read to easily).

The sound in the other hand was pretty good. I also liked the final touch with the cigarrete being blowed by the wind.

What really bugs me, is that in order to make a message like this sunk in the mind of the ppl, you have to use some sort of stage resource. Humor, suspense or drama, for example. I saw the other day here in Newgrounds a flash about not doing exercise, and it was really funny, and the message got to you by being funny. I guess that you can't really make a funny flash with this theme, but maybe try to do something more dramatic or suspense. This movie is kinda of predictible, so work on that.

Put some more work into it, and in that way you can reach people.

well

fatty foods kill more people than smoking. Dont see any films like this but with Big mac's. with that said, i know what your saying. Both are personal choice things but yeah, just didn't really do much for me

It's a start

It's a start to a good cause, I believe. Never smoked, never plan on it, but I have lost family members to smoking before. The thing about it was that they could never quit, probably because they never saw stuff like this :)